I would love to have a $2,000+ computer because my computer has 1 GB of DDR RAM which is 10 years old they have already released DDR3 which is 125% faster than DDR and all i want is 8-16 GB which is 800-1600% faster 800-1600% faster that is a absolutely massive upgrade for only $25 per chip. do you want me to get really peeved off when my computer lags? or when my computer lags so much it crashes? My games load up so slow it isn't funny! My CPU has 1.49 G.HZ!! 1.49 G.HZ! The CPU I would like is 3.39 G.HZ. That is 1.9 G.HZ difference THAT IS HUGE!!! That is an increase of 190%! 190% that is word loading up in under 1 Minute! that is Napoleon Total war in 10 Minutes not 20-30 Minutes! I would like an increase my Video card GB to 2 GB not .5! .5 that is 4x as much! My computer has been upgraded but you only allowed me to upgrade certain parts and one of the parts I couldn't up grade was the Motherboard and that is the thing that every thing plugs into so if that is ancient then the rest of my computer is Ancient and slow which would have been better to NOT have upgraded a tiny piece of it which makes it worse to have upgraded because a lot of it crashed and burned at a latter stage but because you didn't want to upgrade certain parts my computer is only 10% faster it has the same ran speed, same CPU, Same Video card, SAME MOTHERBOARD and the same things in it.
Pathos
Mum and Dad I deserve a new computer because when my old computer laggs and crashes I get really REALLY angry and when I get angry I feel like throwing things. When one person in our family is angry then something really really bad happens. Do you want this? DO YOU WANT THIS!? Our it is really bad when this happens so to help our family out we should be me a new CPU so we can at least put down a lot of the anger in this family.
Ethos
Do not understand
Mum and Dad I deserve a new computer because when my old computer laggs and crashes I get really REALLY angry and when I get angry I feel like throwing things. When one person in our family is angry then something really really bad happens. Do you want this? DO YOU WANT THIS!? Our it is really bad when this happens so to help our family out we should be me a new CPU so we can at least put down a lot of the anger in this family.
Ethos
Do not understand
There is a strong use of logos in the first speech but it seems a bit too long and way too fact heavy. The pathos speech uses a strong imperative and rhetorical questions.
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